Okay. So. Dont take this the wrong way but I was a little bit nervous for this story. I know in the past youve struggled a bit with confidence in your storyline and it was coming across and I was just terrified that youd fall back into that here. I think it helps that this was a chapter fic, but you had to post it all at once and then get feedback from your readers.
I. Am. So. Happy. B/c this story rocked my socks.
I was all how the hell is football star!Adam and shy!Kris gonna work but this all totally made sense. There were no questions left unanswered and the answered didnt feel contrived or forced but they made sense.
Leila is pretty much the most amazing mom! And Neil was pretty damn awesome himself. Adam threw a punch and SEXY ALERT! sometimes violence is the answer, no.
Great job! ♥ ♥ ♥